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Tears drip from my face
salt stains my skin
my anger grows
with the drip drop of salty tears.

"Why me?"
I always ask myself
"Why do I always have to be abused?"

I am not alone,
I know,
but I am the lone victim
of a long lasting vendetta,
a hatred that I have long since had.

The mirror, I see, to my soul grows darker
anger fills my veins
as I hold up a knife.

A voice screams "KILL!"
and another speaks calmly, "don't be rash"

As I drop the knife
I fall to my knees,
and sob silently.

All the people I hold dear
are to far away.

I have nobody,
not a person near,
that can help me.

Please,
oh please,
help me stay safe.

My body is reckless,
and my mind is scared.

My fears will have taken over
and my life will come to an end,
as I drown in a river of sorrow.
I am really depressed and I just needed to let some of it out and this was the best way that I could at this moment in time. I can't wait to go to my friends house next week because then I can get away from my sister and her bratty son that doesn't have any respect for anything r anyone. I do not own rights to the picture. I got the picture from WhenAngelsCries.
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WhenAngelsCries Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love the poem, hope you feel better soon. Thanks for the credit
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks, and your welcome
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Sparkguy Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
*speechless*
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol :)
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Sparkguy Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
:iconamazingplz:...
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ლ(ಠ_ಠლ) win
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Sparkguy Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Pure win.
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol
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Sparkguy Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Look, PewDiePie.
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:O I LOVE PEWDIEPIE!!!!
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battlebrothertherix Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm normally so good with words, yet they fail me here.
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
is that a good thing or a bad thing?
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battlebrothertherix Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's a good thing.
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks ^^
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segura2112 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Very powerful. Thank You
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, and your welcome
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xy2kura Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
I'm sorry but it's really hard for me to even consider reading something when there's a copyrighted picture attached. Granted, you say you don't own it but by DA copyright rules you still can't use it. You must obtain written permission of the original artist and show proof of that. Therefore, I kindly ask you remove this picture and either 1) draw something yourself to attach this to. OR 2) Find a picture here on DA and get written permission from that artist to use such and post proof in your comments.
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Alright I understand where you come from. I do that with my motivational posters but I had this one on my laptop from a few months back that I had found on google, and thought it perfect, so I used it. I'll continue to use it until I get I find another picture that fits and have written permission from them. I actually expected to get more picture like this from people on here, but your the first.
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xy2kura Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
I decided to see if I could help. Since this picture has a sad/lonely feel to it (least in my opinion) I aimed for that. Plus the writing seems to have that vibe. Also, I checked the artists activity to make sure it was fairly recent. If they aren't to your liking, let me know what you are looking for and I'll try to help out. :)

1) [link]
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3) [link]
4) [link]
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
did you already check with the deviants?
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xy2kura Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
I checked their recent activity but as for actual asking, it needs to be you. Since this is your poem and you'll need their permission plus s/s (screenshot) the proof. You even said so yourself you would get written permission yourself. All I was doing was leading you to some works to potentially use if you liked them enough to ask permission on them. :)
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I don't mind asking I just didn't want to ask if you had already done it yourself ^^ thanks
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xy2kura Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Nah I wouldn't ask for someone else when it's their work. I only checked their recent activity to make sure the artist wasn't gone for a week or something more or seemed no chance of them logging back in anytime soon. But otherwise, np and hope you get a response from them soon.
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :)
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xy2kura Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
Well sadly a lot of motivationals violate the copyright as well to just rip from anime/manga/tv/movies etc and put it together. Crediting isn't allowed. But there's millions of people, only a handful of DA staff and it's not like those of us who support copyright can catch every single thing either. But if I do see it, I try to be nice on it first and if that doesn't work out there are other measures. But I always hope one will read and take it to heart rather then a knock down drag out. :)
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RSARYR Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist
This poem is very deep and very beautiful
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :)
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TechnoJara Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Student General Artist
aw, i hope you feel better ;-;

i like to write stuff when i feel like butt, but my poems are no where near as pretty as this.
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :)
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die2live2die Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Student Artist
great poem a lot of depth and meaning
its actually made me think of my situation but anyway hope things get better
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :) and things have been alittle better since i wrote it earlier, not much, but a bit, im just happy that people actually like this
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die2live2die Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Student Artist
well thats good and its a really good poem very understandable, and connects deeply to people that have gone through a deep emotional pain and when people make things like this it helps others so thanks
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
your very welcome. I was actually debating on opening a commision thing just for poetry
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die2live2die Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Student Artist
i think you should you are very good
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you.
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die2live2die Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Student Artist
welcome
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i hope that things get better for everyone
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IsleintheSkye Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Student Writer
Poems are wonderful that way, aren't they? You can let out pain without anyone being hurt, you feel better, and sometimes, like here, you make something wonderful :hug:
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank u :iconhugplz:
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IsleintheSkye Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome! Its what I do, and playing piano. =)
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i love the piano :)
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IsleintheSkye Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Writer
=D
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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amen-no-suomynona Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope you'll feel better soon. It hurts, we know. So, frown when it's time to frown and smile when it's time to smile. :)
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank :)
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amen-no-suomynona Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ur welcome~ :iconhurrdurrplz: I meant what I said and I said what I said...
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i really appreasiate it ^^
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amen-no-suomynona Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconbrohugplz:
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Ita-chan12 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist
this is wonderful, and the pic is ok too. It's very much like you got into my head and read what i was thinking. Thank you for this Its important.
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